Monday, September 8, 2008

The Stunning Beauty...That Sunday Night...

You all must have been to malls of today...hustling n bustling with a lot of people everywhere...shouting children, huge families, young eye-locked couples, spruced-up girls dressed-to-kill and wandering guys with opportunistic eyes...

Nikhil, 23, along with 2 of his close friends, Arun and Vyomkesh went to one of these malls on a really lifeless Sunday just to change the boring mood he was engulfed with due to the recent break-up he had with his girlfriend. The weather was pleasant, so they planned to take up a rickshaw rather than a regular 3-wheeler auto. The hell-bent Rs. 5 bargaining with one rickshaw-wallah made them walk almost half of the distance up to the mall to find another one, but instead of giving them a winner like feeling which can be seen on any Indian Housewife's face after getting a successful bargain deal, this episode had worsened their Sunday mood...

Being really pissed-off coz of the mundane dinner they used to have at home, their main motive was to have good food in this mall along with some raking to the eyes which definitely is the worthy by-product for anyone in a mall on any given Sunday.

So, they went to a restaurant full of so many people that even after somehow managing to get the self-served food, they had to wait for a long time to find a place where they could sit and eat. Vyomkesh really got heated up and the moment he decided to walk out of the place without having the dinner, an old couple from a far away corner got up from their seat, looking content after their dinner. This was the moment; the three of them had to run a lot of distance to get the recently emptied seat.

With filled plates in both of his hands, suddenly Nikhil started running at the top of his speed looking forward may be to break Bolt’s new olympic record, cutting from the middle of the crowd, crossing over the wild kids on the way, the slippery floor and the wary watchful eyes... While he was about to reach the much wanted table; the old couple came back on the seat crushing his hopes of the cherished award in the form of the table, right there, yet again.

But the couple had come only to collect the purse which the lady had left by mistake on the table. Nikhil and his friends gasped a pang of fresh air and grabbed the seat, to finally enjoy their dinner. Plenty of Indian delicacies like Chole Bhature, Raj Kachori, Paneer Tikka, mouth watering Bhelpuri and Sweet Lassi had filled the empty hollows of their craving stomachs.

But that was not enough for all but Arun, the guy with an unending appetite. He said, "I am not done, I want to eat some Chinese too." Hence, they had to go up to the food court, usually found on the terraces of these malls, providing plenty of food options to fill the foodie desires of the ever hungry Arun.

While Arun was exploring his Chinese eating desires..., Nikhil’s eyes suddenly met those beautiful eyes, those exquisite pair of red sandals, those long well-curled hair, that white bracelet, those Jolied lips, and that stunningly amazing face. He had not seen similar features from a long-long time. She was perfect..., a Diva, a beauty, a Goddess standing somewhere right in front of him. Their eyes met...once...twice and even thrice...but nothing happened. Nikhil thought, "It might just be a casual look...which keeps happening in the mall."

But, that beauty turned up to the same Chinese eatery zone right next to the place where Nikhil was standing. She grabbed her already prepared order and went up to the seating zone. Nikhil’s eyes followed, wishing that she does not at-least sit next to some guy coz that will crush his heart suggesting she already has a boyfriend. In fact, Nikhil wished that she would have come with some friends of hers so that the situation becomes easier to handle and somewhat approachable for him. But what he sees takes his breath away. To his dismay, the girl sat right next to a huge fat man, with bald head and white moustache, a definite colonel look...No points for guessing, he was surely her Father with a damn angry look on his face like the one which was typically last seen in Amrish Puri’s eyes in DDLJ, the Bollywood flick which inspires every young Indian heart.
While Nikhil was in his own world, suddenly Arun appeared, with his well garnished Chinese noodles along with Vyomkesh. He pinched Nikhil shouting, “Kaha hai dude…what the hell has happened to you, why are you sweating badly in this chilling air-conditioned space?” And Nikhil couldn't stop narrating his newfound love story right from his heart telling them that he has fallen in love, yet again, but this time it really seems for real.

When Arun and Vyomkesh saw the girl, her mystic beauty swept the floor away from their feet too. They soon decided to sit down at the most 'strategically' placed location, out of the few options available, on Nikhil’s suggestion. Generally, friends laugh things off in these situations which happen quite often in malls. But gauging Nikhil’s seriousness they coaxed Nikhil to do something, charged him up, saying things like you are the only one who can do something…it’s now or never types. Reassuring him that if something happens to him, they would be the first to run away at the top their speeds...

But Nikhil had lost all hopes by this time, seeing that when the girl has come with her Father, Mother and her sister, it’s naturally an impossible proposition to talk to her or for that matter, even approach her. The guy looking for love, decided that he would do nothing insane and sit quietly and cry on his bad luck, after all the girl is with that huge Godzilla sized Father. He couldn't do anything; already life had given him enough bruises, not any more…Nikhil just sat quietly in anticipation of an opportunity…

Suddenly, the beauty got up...turned...their eyes met again, she went up to one of the counters and bought a bottle of mineral water, fancied an amazing look at him again and got back to her seat. This eye-locking had a catastrophic effect on Nikhil’s heartbeat which was soaring a peak of a lifetime. Nikhil was about to get back to his normal self and guess what, she got up again, this time to fetch tissue papers and the stunning eyes met with the opportunistic ones, yet again, leaving Nikhil mesmerized...

But, since the situation was out of Nikhil’s control and since Arun had already gulped down his noodles and had ran away from the situation to save himself from the anticipated beating due to Nikhil’s intentions, Nikhil too decided to leave with Vyomkesh, crushing his lively emotions to a logical death.

The moment they got up from their seat...nothing happened; the moment they started walking...nothing happened; but the moment they crossed the pleasant smell of that amazing perfume of her's, another ray of hope came Nikhil’s way. She rose again from her seat and reached the same Chinese vendor again which was located a little far from the place where the moustached Devilish villain of Nikhil’s new found love-life was sitting. Gauging the moment and finally living his dream, Nikhil left Vyomkesh on the way; he headed the Chinese vendor...leaving Vyomkesh shocked.

He went up there, very close to the counter, right next to where the stunning beauty was standing. For a moment he couldn't breathe, words couldn’t come out of his mouth, he was not even able to blink his eyes. They were staring at each other, standing right next to each other, face to face. A set of three words, “Can we talk?”, Nikhil popped out the question. She blinked her eyes for a moment, a whiff of fear rolled down her throat and she whispered another set of three words, “Not right now!” and she quickly went back leaving Nikhil with an insanely questioned look...

Lot of thoughts went through Nikhil’s mind, “Not right now!”, it might mean..., “Yes!, but not right now!” or it might mean..., “No!!!, not right now and never ever after!”. Nikhil was confused, what he should do, his friends had already left downstairs without telling him whether they are waiting or not, and the girl for whom he was ready to go till the last mile was sitting back right next to her family. He was asking himself, “I should wait” or “I should approach her again” or “I should talk to the angry Colonel directly” or “I should at least pass down my contact number” or “I should wait and follow her”...so many questions...he was devastatingly confused...

What should Nikhil do? What should be his next step? Can you complete Nikhil’s story, if you would have been in his place what would you have done? What if the girl goes to a movie after the dinner with her family in the same mall? What if she moves back in her father's car back home? Did the girl had similar feelings for Nikhil? Can you help Nikhil decide his next move? Well, Nikhil is waiting…

Now, its your time to comment, post your suggestions, post your thoughts, post anything you wish to...the blog is waiting...So, start pouring in ur comments…



PS: The above story is based on imaginary thoughts. All characters in the story are fictitious, any resemblance to actual events in any mall or with any person, living or dead, is purely coincidental.

16 comments:

Sambit Pattnaik said...

Nikhil you Ramantic brute!!!

Alas you left it that...this story needs an ending, for sure....and shame Arun for being the cowardly person.

akashthematrix said...

@Sambit:
I wont call Arun coward...after all it was becoz of Arun's hunger only, tht Nikhil cud go up the food court and meet the beauty...to finally show off his romanticism...kyon?

Unknown said...

This is too much of film...jst like a shahrukh's movie...

Anonymous said...

If I was Nikhil I would show the girl my blog.

I would also contemplate suicide.

But then, luckily, I am not Nikhil.

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

Poor nikhil..just cursing his bad luck and timing..turned around to go back to vyomkesh who still had that puzzled look on his face…and that’s when he saw a little piece of paper folded and crushed on the counter..something prompted him to pick it up..and as he unfolded it to see what it was..
“9873909569-Bhargavi …post 11!!.”
Was he shocked..or surprised..or elated..or whatever..he turned around to look at her..and his astonishment matched her beautiful smile..
“Bhargavi..goodness…shes given me her number…!!”..
By then Vyomkesh and Arun (who were praying for Nikhil’s life for having taken a panga with Hitler’s daughter)reached up to him to unlock his gaze from Bhargavi..who he had been staring for a noticeable amount of time..
Back in his senses..Nikhil hesitatingly moved from the place…He didn’t want to go..she was so pretty..so innocent looking..not even for once could he take her eyes off her…and here these morons were trying hard to take him away…
All through his way back..he couldn’t stop thinking about her..while the other two kept thanking God for saving their friend from a public beating…and obviously planning on the evening “daaru party”
Obviously Nikhil did not tell them anything..and he was both shocked and pleasantly surprised at his behaviour..He who had always shared every little detail of his life to his buddies…did not want to tell about this new happening..
He kept looking at his watch..
“ohh no..its just 6:30..i still have some good four and a half hours to go”


you want me to continue..we can have both an extremely romantci..as well as a hilarious ending to this one..but the way i write..its gonna take up all of ur space:-)

Anonymous said...

@Roach:
First of all its a pleasure to see u here...
Secondly, Nikhil's only problem is tht he doesn't hav the slightest contact of tht girl wid him...how to paas on the blog details?
So u suggest him to commit suicide...poor yet daring Nikhil...r u ready for tht?

Anonymous said...

Stop stalking the poor girl!!! leave her alone..nikhil should learn to control his wandering eye considering he has a girlfriend whom he seems to have conveniently forgotten about since he hit the mall.

akashthematrix said...

His frens were madly discussing the daring act which Nikhil showed today to at least approach tht girl...they were asking and giving him standing ovations on his mahnly act...also asking him tricks, sharing their failed experiences and enquiring on how to go abt this and get successful at showing this “girl-patao” art...

Nikhil, who is always showing-off and boasting abt his escapades wid girls; talkin abt his gutsy tales all through had gone in a completely modest mode today, he was on one hand pleased and surprised with himself while on the other, he was nervous...very nervous...since time was ticking very slowly today...every minute was passing like an hour for him...he was eagerly waiting for his watch to turn 11 asap...Einstein's relativity theory was proving true to him "When you are courting a nice girl, an hour seems like a second; when you sit on a red-hot cinder, a second seems like an hour". Well, right now, Nikhil seemed he was sitting almost on a cinder...

Guess what, in all this thought process, it had turned 10:30 already in his watch and excitement was on the top of his nerves, he was not yet able to get his mind in control...restlessness was gripping him madly...he was thinking of writing another script...WHAT TO TALK, MAHN...?

"How to call her?”...”What should I start with?"...On one hand, he was not able to take his thoughts off from that last smile of hers which she had fancied after giving her phone number...and on the other hand, his frens were continuously arguing and gripping his attention on the worldly issues which guys discuss after they get drunk...

"Hi, I am Nikhil...Naam to suna hoga!"
Oh! thats so cliched n so filmy...

"Hi Bhargavi, Show me a smile...!"
No, that won’t work...

"Hi, I have fallen in love manier times but this is first time I have realized what love actually is"
That’s stylish...might work, I'm not sure...

Nikhil was thinking of so many ways on how to start this conversation...coz he had read in so many management books, "First impression is the lasting impression", but this was none of the marketing gyaan he had learnt from his MBA books, this was real life...

Suddenly, all the clocks in Nikhil’s world alarmed 11, this came around with dual feelings…”Should I wait…, I shouldn’t appear too desperate” or “Should I call…, after all, I should show my real self, I am truly in love and have waited for all these 4.5 hours eagerly…”




@santasizing: 3 things for u
1. I wish Bhargavi's number tht u’ve given, is not for real...nahi to woh gai...
2. Would love ur taking up all my space...no issues on tht gal :)...lets giv it a shot 2gether...
3. What hav u done! My frens hav already started askin for the so called "Daaru party..."...Nikhil being my imaginary creation... :)
4. Now, its ur turn...:)

Unknown said...

And suddenly the music plays “Tujhe dekha to yeh Jaana sanam…Pyaar hota hai Deewana Sanam…” Whole atmosphere becomes romantic with Nikhil flying in the sky.
“Nikhil will you pick up your godaamn phone”, Arun shouts. Nikhil revives back from the dream to see that his phone is ringing.
An unknown number. Who will call him this late? Was it her ex-girlfriend?
One more shout from Arun and he picks up the call.
“Hello, Mr. Nikhil. Welcome to 93.2 Romance Radio City. This is RJ Vaishali with you on the Program “Dil ki Baatein”.
“Hi Vaishali, very unexpected call”.
“So Nikhil, since the program is Dil ki Baatein, let me ask you do you have a girlfriend?”
“Uhmmm…Yeah…No…Actually No..But you can help me with one” says Nikhil with a grin on his face.

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

“ohh Jesus…what the heck..I don’t wanna be talking to a radio girl at this hour…”
But why am I doing it….
Him:-“Well Vaishali…can we talk some other time…since right now..I really should be on another call..”
“He sounds so good…”(vaishali was already impressed wid the casual way in which he almost ignored her”
Her:“uhh..oh..sure..so I guess its ur girlfriend u plan to call…”
Him:-“Well…not really..but she could be the one…so wish me luck…”
Her:-“sure…all the best…so listeners…..”
And he hung up.

“Ohhhh noo..its 11:15 already…”

Without thinking for a second..he immediately rushed to the balcony of his house..away from his super drunk friends..and..dialed her number..
Ring 1..ring 2…
And he realized that in the midst of all of this commotion..he hadn’t even decided on his pick up line
"ohh no..what am I gonna tell her..!!!"
Ring 3…ring 4…
“ohh..i guess shes slept..”
“obviously she will..u moron… he cursed again”
Ring 5…ring 6…
And just as he was expecting the Vodafone lady to speak in her funny accent..he heard a sound..which was almost in whispers…
“hello…”
He almost dropped his phone..
She: “hello…hello…”
Him: “uhh…ohh..hello…is that you”(“huh Nikhil..what kinda question is that” he thought to himself)
Already having cursed himself enough…he heard the sweetest laughter..he had ever heard in his life..
She: “hmmm..ofcourse its me..Bhargavi..When I give you my number..it would be me right..who would pick up the call..right Nikhil…anyways..how are you?”

Now this time..he DID drop his phone..

“she knows my name…huh..how?so I know her..or she knows me..or what?how?what?when?”

He rushed to pick the dropped mobile lest it got disconnected..
Him: “you know me?”

She: “well yeah..I don’t give my number to strangers right..what do you think”

Him:-“this is insane..we have never met before!!”

She:-“well..are you sure?”

Him:-“ofcourse I am..i can NEVER forget such a pretty face”(ouch..now what had he just said..he was almost sounding desperate..another curse)
She:- “Thanks for the compliment Nikhil..I guess then I should leave you with some guessing to do..may be when you can..you will call me”
Him:-“huh…now whats that?”
She“I gotta go..waiting for your call Nikhil..Good night…”
Him:-You cant hang up like that…we.. we haven’t even spoken enough”(gosh..why am I souding so desperate!!!)
She:-“well..like I said..I know you..very well..but you don’t..and its not fair that you should be speaking to a stranger in the middle of the night..you would rather and enjoy your drinks with your friends..I don’t wanna disturb you”
Him:-“How the heck do you know that my friends are drinking?”
She:-“umm..Just a guess..I wouldn’t expect something else out of you guys on a weekend anyways..Goodnight..and see you soon…ohh..talk to you soon”

…And with that…the call was disconnected..

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

So Akash...
what do you think?
and in response to your points..here I go
1. I wish Bhargavi's number tht u’ve given, is not for real...nahi to woh gai...

Well..it was actually my number that I used when i ggn..So I really dont know who is using it:P..

2. Would love ur taking up all my space...no issues on tht gal :)...lets giv it a shot 2gether...

Thanks!!:-)im more than flattered and willing..you must have guessed it from the size of this post..

3. What hav u done! My frens hav already started askin for the so called "Daaru party..."...Nikhil being my imaginary creation... :)

Per Bhargavi(whos my creation:-))guys cant do anything better right:-)
so have fun..and plan it this weekend:-)
4. Now, its ur turn...:)
check out my space:-)

akashthematrix said...

Nikhil was completely out of his own senses, so much was happening around him…first he meets a stunning beauty, then he manages to get her mobile number and when he calls her she says…”I know you”…”Talk to you soon...”. The girl about whom I was puzzled 4 hours back…the girl about whom I was thinking my first pick-up line half an hour back…the girl with whom I was ready to go the last mile. What she says is that…“She knows me”!?!?!?!?!?

Mahn! How is it possible? Is this happening for real? Or…Is it a prank being played with him?... Did he just had a talk with the girl of his dreams or is he actually dreaming?…He thought, “Either, I am watching too many movies these days or I am working a lot in the office…whatever, what is happening to me…”


Even after thinking and forcing his mind for zillions of times; Nikhil, the killer, the female charmer; was not able to remember whether he had ever seen that girl before or has he ever heard of the name Bhargavi ever before. He knew that he still remembers of his first crush which he had when he was in class III, then how is it possible that he don’t have any old memories of the cutest face he had seen today…?

Standing with a puzzled look on his face, in the pleasant environs of his balcony; thinking about the last phone call he had received, suddenly, Nikhil heard of a roar of laughter coming from one of the rooms of his flat. It took a friction of a second for his brainy neurons to determine that the laughing out loud sound was of Arun and Vyomkesh. This might just be a regular joke which the drunken frens share every time they get drunk.

Even in this terrible situation, a thought crossed Nikhil thought, “It is really interesting how friends argue during the time of their drinking together, and it is all the more weird how soon they become friends again after they get drunk and share their wildest ideas and jokes…laugh out loud.”


Gripping his attention, Nikhil realized that the laughter was coming closer to him… He heard them closing in…, Nikhil saw two shadows approaching him in the balcony and there they were, Arun and Vyomkesh. He saw a very nasty grin on both of their faces…there was something so weird on their face that was making Nikhil mad…he was about to gather his thought and ask about what’s happening, and before that Vyomkesh posed the question, “Kaisi rahi konbharseshan, bhid Bhargavi bhabhi?”

“What the hell…what did he just said…how can he know the name. Please God, don’t do this to me! I don’t want my frens to play a prank on my new found real love…” Thoughts were rambling in Nikhil’s mind and he was just trying to grip them and his phone rang again…

santasizing...Fantasizing said...

His head would burst..he thought..
With so many activites in one go..Nikhil was almost holding his head..to understand this sudden turn of events..
Tired..and drained..he picked up the continuous phone call that irritated him..

“Hello…!”

“Hi Nikhil Beta…where are you?you haven’t called for 2 days now..i was so worried”

“Mom…we spoke yesterday na..how is it two days then”(nikhil was clearly irritated…coz he never spoke to his mother like that…)

“But..it was yesterday morning..and if we hadn’t spoken today..it would be two days tomorrow right….”she said

“mamma…ur too much..”and Nikhil was all smiles..

His mom was someone he loved the most..and no matter how bad his mood was..his mom..would always lighten it up…just like today..

“so how have you been?how was your day today?”she asked her routine question

“ uhmm..it was nice..lazy kinda day…did nothing much..simply lazed around ..aur kya..”

“ hmmm..okay…acha beta..I have something really important to discuss..u know Mr Verma na..your father's friend from Mumbai,,,”

“ mom…no..please spare me..u know Iam not interested in all this rubbish..I am way too young to get married”
This wasnt the first time his mom was speaking like that...Ever since he had completed his MBA..and joined his job..this was a discussion that happened almost every fortnight..and he was used to it by then..
“ arre..to whos asking you to get married now..atleast meet her once…cant you…shes in your city itself” she almost asserted..

“Mom please..i am very tired right now..and I really don’t wish to discuss this..may be we can ..when I come home…but on phone..no way!!”

“hmmm..you don’t seem to be in a nice mood…we can talk about it some other time..but just in case you change your mind..let me know…good night beta”

“good night mom…I love you…!!”

and right as he put down the phone..he rushed out to speak to his friends…and get the matter sorted..

Him:-What the heck…how do you guys know who I was speaking to?

Vyomkesh:-We heard you talking man…

Arun:-Damn…I have never seen you so confused..hehehe

Vyom:-whatever happened to the dude thing…dude!!

Arun:-that was hilarious..seeing u so confused..

Him:-Guys its not funny..are u guys planning a prank on me..if you are…that certainly isn’t a good idea..

Arun:-Crap..why would we plan a prank on YOU…we got better things to do man..

Vyom:-ya..if we had that kinda brains..we would have got a girl each for ourselves yaar…”

Arun:-dude..whats wrong..you look worried..

Nikhil didn’t say anything..he was confused to the hilt..he knew his friends wouldn’t lie to him…if he confronted them like that..so who is it..
Who is she?
How does she know him?
Was she fluking?or just having fun?
Was she Swati’s friend?(his ex gf!!)
No ya..Swati had no reason to do something bad to him..she herself had called it quits..
“Lord…what is it??!!”
and lost in his thoughts..he dozed off..

on the other side of the phone..Bhragavi’s mind was running faster..
Had she suggested a lot..would he get to know who she was
She didn’t want him to know too early..she wanted him to feel the pain..and the trouble..
And she wanted to have some fun too…at his expense..
She couldn’t spare him so easily..

Afterall...

akashthematrix said...

@Santasizing aka Richa:
Girl, this is getting way to interesting...
Just read this last post...a huge smile on my face was visible on the black background of the desktop...

Some good news 4 u: A few friends hav gone through the entire build-up and they r reely loving it!


Khair, just wanted to convey this message...Now its time to let my mind roll...all for Nikhil...:)

Keep watchin this space..

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Unknown said...

He had hurt her best friend, Aruna.
Aruna loved Nikhil so much. Nikhil always took Aruna for granted. She cared for him so much. She would do all her projects, assignments, make notes for him; since he never had time for studies. He was busy dating somebody, going to disc or playing video games.
Aruna proposed Nikhil 2 years back. But, Nikhil, thought it to be a joke. He explained her that it was just an infatuation, and soon she will overcome it. She was broken, but was determined that one day he will return to her. After final year exams, she got job in Bangalore. Nikhil went to Mumbai. Aruna kept in touch with him. One day, Nikhil surprised her that he is coming to Bangalore. She thought that probably now he might propose her. She was too excited, was full of dreams.
Nikhil told her that he will come to her home, and she need not come to airport. She prepared all his favorite delicacies. Dressed in her favorite clothes. Wore the bracelet which Nikhil gifted her on Friendship’s day.
She opened the door. Oh My God!! He looked more charming then ever… they hugged each other. And suddenly she noticed he was not alone. He introduced her with Swati. He told her that they were working in same company. Swati has been transferred to Bangalore so he came to drop her.
She was devastated. But she thought to herself, Swati was the prettiest girl. Nikhil deserved her. She was no good for him. She was happy for both of them. That night she cried and cried. After 2 months she left to New Jersey, for her new project. Bhargavi knew she will not return.
Bhargavi always wanted to meet Nikhil and slap him. She hated him. That night, she had gone for dinner with her parents. And she saw him. She at once knew it was Nikhil. How could she forget that innocent face which has fooled Aruna?
She knew she couldn’t talk to him in front of her Dad, so she dropped the tissue paper. Knowing of Nikhil’s flirt nature she knew he will call her.
And he did.